Members' Poems 2010: in every issue of Poetry News, we ask a leading poet for their pick of members' poems on a chosen theme
SUMMER 2010
Theme: Buried Language
Judge: David Morley
“In writing poems, we hear, see and feel every word, space and punctuation mark intimately. We might even find our voice in the spaces between words or the open space around a poem (we may veil our voice in such spaces). The ‘buried language’ of a poem is not imme-diately visible yet words bristle with meanings; they are prickly with histories and usages. It is language within language.
"Then there are the buried languages of our own history, in my case the Romany language with which I have tried to spring the sound and speech of poems. The trick is to bring such a buried language to life so that it becomes part of speech. Buried languages such as this are part of the song of language, not some subsong of a people that, as Romany has it, are chindi-chibengoro – ‘without tongue’.
"This theme proved popular. 300 poems were entered and the quality was excellent; I’m grateful for the chance to read your work. I chose this theme to open possibilities and the final six poems have a good deal of breadth in their approach. I found their energy attractive.
"The memorable ‘Torfaen’ by Philip Williams offers a beguiling argument on the side of the rain and river, the overheard and underheard voices of the natural world. ‘Gosmari, Albertel and Carvoncello’ by Petra Christian possesses a language so lively it revives the dead. Sally Goldsmith’s ‘Received Pronunciation’ visits the territories of idiom with love, humour and poetic judgement. The language of Josie Turner’s 'In' is impressively sparse. She writes from a dark place in which “I want a new nothing / to hang by my side” – a remembered phrase that is disturbing and truthful. Frances Green’s ‘Time Capsules’ is telling and deftly measured, while ‘Postcards for Dorothy Pinkney’ by Lois Wilson has a simple but penetrating audacity. Among other entries, I would like to note the poems by Glyn Essex, Amanda Geary, Dominique Gracia, Nigel Hutchinson, Charles G. Lauder, Gill McEvoy, Emma Must, Lesley Saunders and Jacqueline Tobin.
Philip Williams
Torfaen
They told us Torfaen – Stone Breaker –
was the older name and that our river
only became grey – Afon Llwyd –
when they came to cut the coal.
“You could not see it for foam,”
my father said. He remembered its speed,
just as fast as we boys found it,
taking the feet from beneath you, taking its toll.
They all but emptied our valley of magic
when they filled in the fields
between each village to form our town.
Except here, behind Ty Pwca,
where the worn lane rises in its steep bend
beyond The Last Bus Stop and The Fairy’s House:
the Pwca, our Bwgi-Man, your Puck.
And there, where the Candwr Brook –
The Singing Waters – still clears her throat
over smooth, cold stones.
So why, I wondered, from Saxton,
an Elizabethan approximation
of the name we had all used all along?
Had the stream, Torfaen, simply lost her voice
as she broadened to a river
somewhere bleaker, blacker, a place
with spittle in its throat, a rattling in its lungs?
Or did our Afon Llwyd only combine
with Torfaen to form one grey, stone-breaking river
when they baptised us all into one Borough
and gave us each a name we never knew?
Petra Christian
Gosmari, Albertel and Carvoncello
I’m thinking of a church in Rome that sits
upon a clutch of secrets, speckled, rare.
Some sixty foot below, there is a house
filled-in and lost, burned down in Nero’s fire;
on this, the people made another house,
next-door a temple; and these are but roots
for what’s above, four hundred years thence:
a basilica which, in turn, gives rise
to our present, built on its very bones.
Bricolage of ages, stones and frescoes,
St Clement’s thousand years of orisons
hushed up a thousand more of unsung chants,
until men broke daylight back in. And I
fell through the clotted seam of now and here,
descended down these vertiginous pasts,
Time more coldly coating me in each layer.
Dropping through a quadruple tier of ghosts,
– oh, but they were such dead, unshy, lively –
I saw what I had come for: the witness,
earliest, extant, to Italian.
Found in a fresco, flaking on the wall,
half-grown away from its crib of Latin,
the writing goes with a quaint miracle:
St Clement, as saints will, has caused a fuss,
and his arrest is ordered by a lord.
But when the heavies come to take him in
they find him heavier than sin, for they
mistake a fallen column for the man,
arrest, and try to heave, the masonry,
while St Clement steals home, unseen unheard,
muttering (in Latin). What are the words
so precious, with which we glimpse the tilting
of tongues? A prayer to accompany this
comic affair? A bible verse? A song?
It is the nobleman’s demented hiss,
his profane raging at the three blackguards:
– Fili dele pute, traite!
– Go on, you sons of bitches, pull!
Sally Goldsmith
Received Pronunciation
As a boy, my Sussex granddad could
spot the runty dillin in a pig’s litter,
play the fool down the pleached twittern,
cry fainits when he wanted out of the game,
make jokes about the daglets on a sheep’s bum
comparing them to his own number two’s.
From the Warwickshire lot I got
the blart of waltzers at Stratford Mop,
learned to swill the sink after washing up,
to call down the jutty at the side of the ’us –
loud enough to wake the diddikais about whom
my mother said I never should.
In rural Oxfordshire, I wuz moi duck
to aunts who let me tiffle biddy hens
off their eggs, bring in pecked bottles
of miwk off of the step, nudged me
out of looking a sawney, warned me
to avoid the bunt of boys or even a cow.
In Sheffield now with you, flower,
I look after us tranklements, crozzle
my bacon and modge my pudding,
put the door on t’ sneck, go to t’ foot
of our stairs, let da into t’ entry, talk
clarty at neet, lake and love da till ah dee.
Josie Turner
In
I’m tough, you said, towards the end, knowing
it is hard to stop. The shuttle wants to
weave new cloth – we find words; we slot the tongue
of the buckle into a makeshift notch.
Your old saying – I want a new nothing
to hang by my side – resounds. Its after-
shocks of silence taste bitter in my mouth.
I lick the iron bridle, then spit it out.
We are swayed to be makers. Taken with
the class on a lashing afternoon to
a still-raw dual carriageway that mocked up
the land, with plastic earth on our hard hands
we twisted bulbs into an embankment,
so they might bloom one day in the distance.
Frances Green
Time Capsules
They buried both tins together
somewhere under the apple trees,
to be re-discovered in one thousand years
but they weren’t sure, since he could not
converse with them, that he would understand.
His little sister, bright and brilliant, sucked on a pencil
and decided upon: her last Barbie’s best dress;
her own second favourite hair slide; a photograph
of her and Father Christmas at Selfridges;
and three old unwanted Girl Talk magazines.
His own tin looked empty in comparison.
They smiled at him indulgently:
for his twigs; his grass cuttings; his fallen leaf;
and those two red and yellow sweet wrappers
he had kept under his pillow for months.
They did not see that in the space around these things
lay all the fragrances of spring and summer,
the rich descents of autumn, and the sharp scented crackle
of winter fires. Don’t you want
to put anything else in here? they asked him.
He looked at them, uncomprehending –
because there was nothing else or better to be saved
but he wasn’t sure, since they could not
converse with him, that they would understand.
Lois Wilson
Postcards for Dorothy Pinkney
I imagine him to be a veteran,
An old, surviving man, but in fact
His words are younger than I’ll ever be again.
Those thirty-seven postcards carry
Only thirty-seven times a dozen words.
And they’re enough to gather up my mother’s
Mother’s mother’s worth. Her whole collection
Left to us is just behind that frame, those
Thirty-seven swirling, fading nicknames.
Dearest Pink of Perfection. Nothing more
Or less was necessary then. Now,
Only the pictures are seen. The backs
Are what we memorised before we hid – protected –
Every single one of them behind a screen.
SPRING 2010
Theme: Dangerous Sports
Judge: Penelope Shuttle
“I chose these poems for their less-expected approach and the ingenious ways the poets found fresh and rich energies in their dangerous sports. Lyn Moir’s use of fencing metaphor is perfectly wielded; I liked this poem’s air of serious mischief that runs the reader through with its wit. In ‘The Apres-ski Was Not What She Expected’, Annie Chance employs images of vulnerability to great effect. Alessio Zanelli’s ‘At A Loss’ is a sombre and compelling poem about Russian roulette, darkly lyric. Pat Murgatroyd’s poem, ‘Lady Sword Swallower’, chooses a sharp weapon, telling with deadpan panache of the woman who has learned how to create her own life armour by learning to swallow a sword. ‘Tide’ by Philip Rush has a powerful narrative pathway. Using list poem technique, ‘Flawed Boxing Metaphors’ by Robin Kidson is a powerful account of life as struggle. I also loved the insouciance of ‘Ghost writing the climber’ by Kristina Close. Finally, Patrick Maddock’s ‘Rout’ is a haunting poem of two mysterious beings in a green world. It reads to me both as a song and a drama, and is also an excellently-realised sonnet.”
Lyn Moir
Cri de Coeur
You come at me from all angles,
ricocheting, high on adrenalin –
you’ve got me climbing the wall...
Just look at it from my perspective:
the oblique approach,
saut de chat, passement, roulade, demitour...
franchissement, frankly,
doesn’t shatter my defences,
dress it how you will in fancy French...
Parkour? Mais merde alors...
In plain English, darling,
take a running jump...
Annie Chance
The Apres-ski Was Not What She Expected
She cocks her head to one side now to listen
when we speak, as she is partially deaf since
her skis hit a pine tree scattering steel stars...
and all the kings’ horses and all the kings’ men...
Eggs all look the same but each one is as unique
as a soldier in the Emperor Qin’s terracotta army.
Brown speckled eggs remind me of this daughter
with her freckles in summer, her pet name – Ming.
I am driving across North Wales to Holyhead
to catch the Dublin ferry. It’s a quiet evening,
on the back seat of the car sits two dozen eggs
free range, fresh, from our farm in Somerset.
My car hums loudly with the steady throb
of the rescue helicopter. I decelerate.
It was the second day of her skiing trip
tinnitus her après-ski legacy – thin winds
whistling into the high pine trees and round
her head, day in, day out. I drive carefully
with my precious cargo, slow down on bends,
looking forward to soft boiled eggs, soldiers.
Alessio Zanelli
At A Loss
On a mission. A tiny clod amid still, muddy waters.
Alone, no dueller in front, I draw.
Through the cylinder’s bores – the pupil and the gunpowder,
as the cock rests, waiting for the forefinger.
There’s no getting round it, the hour is striking.
A prayer, or a shot in the dark.
Something is sparkling on the burnished metal,
and it’s no glitter one can keep clear of.
Smell and taste – of old, of new;
of without-a-name and without-an-aim.
Everything would end by the bang,
sharp and soon forgotten.
Light, darkness, dusk.
The unconditioned jerk of the eyelid
and the chore of the thumb;
an instant of sorrowful evening.
Loud croaks from all around the spot.
Either big puddle or small pond,
still greedy frogs leap-infest this foul world unseen.
Staring motionless, as if stunned – no smoke from the barrel.
Isn’t it funny? Nothing and nobody is attending,
yet I feel taken by too many things.
Pat Murgatroyd
Lady Sword Swallower
She’s rarer than Lady’s Slipper or Bee Orchids.
She thinks of the minutes, hours, days, weeks –
fingers, spoons, knitting needles, coat-hangers
before the non-retractable solid steel blades
at least two centimetres wide and thirty-eight long.
He thinks of her lips, the pink flesh of her tongue,
veins, oesophagus, unpredictable tilt of her stomach.
Even when reduced to mechanics of muscle control
it makes him shudder – an involuntary reaction
that would probably kill her.
Was it only the gag reflex she desensitised?
Tired of blokes wanting to shove their gristly attention
down her throat she resigned herself to living alone.
Which is why on a cold bathroom floor (after-performance
specks of blood not unusual) a perforated intestine
bled her to her knees. But she came back.
Why is impenetrable. Perhaps because a sword
once brushed her heart where no man did.
Philip Rush
Tide
It is a fact
that Donald Campbell,
or maybe it was his father Malcolm,
completed a standard mile
on the lane between Arlingham
and The Old Passage Inn
in a fascist-branded Bluebird one day in June 1935,
reaching on the first pass a speed of 321 mph
and then a speed of 319 mph on the second pass
just under a hour later
on the way back to Arlingham village
and a pint at The Red Lion.
At its ebb, the stream between
The Old Passage Inn
and the sandstone outcrop of Newnham-on-Severn
looks from the bank so narrow and so bland
that you imagine
being able to wade across
or to ride at walking pace, even,
on a bicycle from the sandbank
on this side to the slipway on the other.
But in only moments
the time perhaps it takes to say a Hail Mary
the tide turns
and seethes upstream
with its little leading wave
in all respects, precisely
like shoppers having waited up all night
for the sales to begin,
impossible to cross and threatening.
Robin Kidson
Flawed Boxing Metaphors
I am growing a garden on his skin.
I plant an iris in the iris of his eye;
On his left temple, I’m cultivating
A red rose; on his right, a patch of pinks.
Into a trench I’ve dug in his cheekbone,
I sow Pink Fir Apple seed potatoes.
On me, he composes a symphony:
A ratatat of drum beats on my brow;
A piccolo staccato on my jaw;
The slow sonorous notes of a cello
On my spleen; chords of harps and violins
Andante sostenuto to my brain.
I am painting pictures on his body:
A blood red Turner sunset on his breast;
A landscape of blue sky and green-brown fields
In his solar plexus; a Cubist abstract
In the style of Picasso on his ribs;
A Jackson Pollock all over his face.
We drink punches until we are punch drunk:
A glass of chardonnay to his glass chin;
A gin and absinthe to my coddled brain;
Napoleon brandy for his bruised skin.
Then, the evening’s final round: an exchange
Of magnums of the finest French champagne.
Metaphors for boxing don’t illuminate.
They mask the truth of manufactured hate,
Sweat stench, blood smear, all-over-body ache.
A fight is not a poem; a noble art
Does not turn the brain of a noble man
To mush; a punch is a punch is a punch.
Kristina Close Ghost-writing the climber
That weekend there was an accident.
But this is not about where you were,
the merry-go-rope and sky crack of walnut
boulders, the sheep wool sliding in the rain –
but who washed the blood and grit from your arms,
who listened to the oh-oh story first, and heard
the cows on the far slope roll black and white, black and
white, releasing their full vocabulary of ‘no’.
Patrick Maddock Rout
Days of will we, won’t we. Showers of daisy-petals.
To have judged his character so incorrectly:
to be here with a bunch of weeds – brambles, nettles.
How could she have known he’d spoil her byway
its intimate hedgerows spreading to enfold him?
His footwear soon dragged and his tongue took a sting.
Mud-pats and rotted leaves grew attached to him:
he wiped them in her bed linen, her soft furnishings.
What was she to make of him – manikin, monster?
She unscrewed his arms out of fear of his claws,
set him in the ditch to scrub the hump off his back
and tucked his bared feet coolly into his jaws.
Now militant rooks command the wires above her.
She retreats down the road and leaves them to check.
WINTER 2009/10
Theme: Disclosure
Judge: Tim Liardet
"Some of the poems submitted concerned themselves with closure but most did not, disclosing so little they merely led themselves into the brambles of non-disclosure. Heidi Williamson's, in evoking the mysteries of vertigo, adopted thebest possible policy – description. A giddy and haunting poem.Emma Danes's 'A&E': ominously exact, spare with disclosure.Sarah Westcott's 'Disclosure' seemed to me - to adapt Heaney'sphrase - helplessly true in its unpretentious diction and sense ofpurpose. Martin Figura's 'Fish' had aunthenticity in abundance, especially in that post-Hughesian "maggoty river-breath". I admired Katrina Naomi's poem for its distillation of a complex idea into a single utterance and finally Christopher North's shamelessly Marquesian 'Bawd at Fiesta San Alberto'.”
Heidi Williamson
Above the Alameda Gardens
Why I chose riding the cable car as the moment
I'm still unsure. We were hanging there,
above the Alameda Gardens, all that beautiful flora
below, with no exit until the journey completed.
The car juddered upwards, we pretended we were
on solid ground, stepped lightly around the metal floor,
swaying around as it threatened to unbalance us,
blinking at the view, trying to take it all in.
A strapping squaddie stood stock still in one corner,
holding the rusted inner rail, his eyes jerking from one vista
to another like a nervous public speaker.
Conscious suddenly we were climbing the face of a cliff
with rocky outcrops, each abyss flew at me. The air
had gone stale with the strain of small scale terrors.
I told you and you couldn't step back. You eyes widened
as we jolted over the mid-journey fixings. An automatic
reaction, your gaze flicked to my midriff. 'Oh' you said. 'Oh'.
As the floor lurched towards me your hand rose and settled
back at your side. You frowned, and all you said
till we safely landed: 'It's best if you don't look down.
Emma Danes A&E
They see through you, land like peculiar
fish on their monitor the soft dark pad
of blood, the fracture’s delicate fin.
Waiting is an ocean at night. I find
you in its depths, as below an x-ray moon:
gutted, truthful, all your bones turned silver.
Sarah Westcott
Disclosure
How you peered into the weave of your pants,
sitting on the metal C of the school toilet,
spreading the gusset, searching
for bright red dots, splodges, Rorschach faces,
unequivocal as poppies.
How, when it came, it came
slowly, confusingly,
brown as silt, thick
and viscous, a smear
like a mark of mud on your forehead.
How you swooned
from the clanging cubicle,
your secret pressed between your legs,
tossed your hair as you overtook
scrums of oblivious boys.
Martin Figura
Fish
I throw a few crumbs, then feel your weight
as you snatch at my barbarous line.
You mouth and mouth as if trying to explain.
All I get is maggoty river-breath. The gilt
of your scales dull in the air. A thumbnail
could easily split your soft underbelly, spill your guts.
I give you back to the river,
its current of brown water.
Katrina Naomi
A Happening At Great Dixter Gardens
Black-red succulents, like a child’s drawing
of a flower, all petals. And now she comes,
anxious, polite, have I seen: a 12-year-old boy
in a red fleece jacket? I say I haven’t.
On these steps to the timber-framed house,
daisies hide the malignant stains
of lichen, among other marks. The cacti
should have been a warning –
their thick, spiked trunks, rude spines.
I just record. I’m just the gatekeeper
for whoever treads down from that world
to this. If the cuckoo saw, it stays silent.
The blackbird chatters, but won’t tell.
The sheep saw nothing. The cacti look on.
Christopher North
Bawd At Fiesta San Alberto
Early evening – the Ukrainians spin on their heels
and their groupies involve us all in the long bare grace
of their legs as they cross the Plaza, arms folded.
“Not enough meat on ‘em,” says the retired sergeant major
as Normandina buys a wooden doll – ¡De Rusia! ¡De Rusia!
she says to the air. It’s a tubular peasant with enormous eyes,
a gloss bigote and rustic smock. Pepe whacks down her cana
then pulls the wooden head and from beneath the smock
a thick matchstick with a red tip leaps forward.
The tractor driver escorting the teacher from East Grinstead,
looks shocked and burrows in her bag of ribbons and beads
as a beer belly churl leans forward to jiggle the head.
¡Ya. esta! ¡Ya esta¡ he shouts, then laughs
like gravel pouring into a galvanized bucket.
Below him a wide-eyed baby intensely sucks a dummy.